YES
Yes indeed.
I love this. I will tell you why.
Okay, my motto is creation. Poetry should be an experience, not a conversation. People write to communicate. People write poetry to convey. You did that.
You not only conveyed something, you expressed it. You constructed a physical grip of it. You made this concept tangible and sensible. That's why I love this.
The shape, the choppiness-- it's pure perfection. Why? Because that is what submission and fear feel like. It's solid, it's stable, it's a tower-- it's your poem.
I'm not in awe. I'm not baffled by your subject or social commentary, and I don't need to be. you managed to sensationalize a sensation.
Brilliant.
Bravo.
I've nothing more to say.
Keep writing
xoxo
Kitty
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