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Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:32 pm
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whitewolfpuppy says...



Knight Onyx claimed her sword and called her sword Jazebell

11. The footsteps
12. Anymore
13. Penguin at the Bottom
14. Love is something, but
15. Cassis poem
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:33 pm
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Knight Onyx claims her shield which she now calls Fallen

16. King Of The Sky
17. The Descent Chapter 1: Picture of a Pink Unicorn Part 1
18. Emerson Essay
19. The Other Side of Depression
20 Sorry....
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:35 pm
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Claiming her new helmet, she now claims its name Michael

21. Droplets
22. Lost
23. The Descent Chapter 1: Picture of a Pink Unicorn Part 2
24. my story-baby dragons
25. The Descent Chapter 2: Hit-Girl Returns Part 1
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:36 pm
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Now able to let her horse rest, she lets Mid-Night have a place to stay.

26. The Descent Chapter 2: Hit-Girl Returns Part 2
27. Language of the Eyes
28. Thrown Words
29. The Bullying Project: Taylor's Story
30. House of Sorrows
31. Teenage Dilemma -Dar Real
32. http://youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=105099
33. The Descent Chapter 4: Muscle Spasms Part 1
34. The Descent Chapter 4: Muscle Spasms Part 2
35. The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 1
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:38 pm
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able to cover her body in the armor for battle. She was ready for anything.

36. The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 2
37. The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 3
38. The Descent Chapter 6: God's Face Part 1
39. Come Summer
40. The Descent Chapter 6: God's Face Part 2
41. The Descent Chapter 6: God's Face Part 3
42. The Descent Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste Part 1
43. Achieving Harmony
44. Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 6) (part 2)
45. Ten's End
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Mon Dec 09, 2013 1:50 pm
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My Loyal Knight Onyx, I must tell you that your review for the work 'The Descent Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste Part 1' was not the first or second on the piece. Also, your review on the work 'Glass' was too short to count toward your mission.

I must therefore ask you to venture out once more into the darkness before you can claim your armour.
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 5:33 pm
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@Rydia
I went back to look at the 'The Descent Chapter 7: A bitter Taste Part 1' and it says that I was the first one. It said I posted during Oct. 26th and everyone else's was 27th and 28th. I don't know if you would want to check that. Also, I understand the 'Glass' piece and I will redo another one for that, though I would kindly ask that you check again on the novel. Thank you for the notice!
~Onyx
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

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Tue Dec 10, 2013 12:17 am
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Sorry about the novel one - you're quite right! That one is fine so I only need one more for you and then you can claim your armour! Again, my apologies and go get that armour!
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Wed Dec 11, 2013 4:21 pm
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No problem! I did redo another one to replace the short poetry one. Thank you again!
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Sun Jan 05, 2014 3:59 pm
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Knight Onyx, it is with great pleasure that I bestow upon you your full armour achievement. Congratulations and godspeed!
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Thu May 22, 2014 2:15 pm
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Sorry it has been so long! End of the year kept me away for a long time. :(

46. Rich As S***

47. The Anchor that gave way

48. http://youngwriterssociety.com//work.ph ... 54#c469254

49. A letter from my grandfather
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  








As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
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