Hi defyingravity01,DK here with review on your poem!
A simple poem but certainly full of implied meanings. The tone and rhythm are perfect and I can read smoothly without wondering how to recite this poem.It's enthralling, until makes me wonder who the person that force you to eat even if you're not hungry. Can you give some clues? I remember I was thinking about the culture of( I don't remember that much) the 'more you fatter, the more beautiful you are (Especially women). Obese people also showed images of wealth and dignity.Remind me if Im wrong
You scream at me,
To eat some food
But I am not
Hungry.
Is it your mom?
Overall,good job!A nice and sad poem to read.Keep it up.
Kudos,cheers.
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