Got some good reviews on this, but hoping you might give a more thorough thought to it? If not, comments are accepted!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109919
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.
The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."
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