Audy's Star Fund! - Donate your Poetry

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unsocialbutterfly
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Wed May 02, 2012 2:03 am
unsocialbutterfly says... · Wed May 02, 2012 2:03 am
Hey! I'd really appreciate a review of this:
work.php?id=95035
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MonoTheElderish
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Wed May 02, 2012 8:50 pm
MonoTheElderish says... · Wed May 02, 2012 8:50 pm
If you could be troubled, I'd appreciate a review of this, As it sits so far. It's the first chapter of my Futuristic/Trench Warfare/Post-apocalyptic WIP novel. It's Rated 18+ for Violence and Language Just to let you know. Thanks!


work.php?id=94840

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Audy
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Thu May 24, 2012 2:18 pm
Audy says... · Thu May 24, 2012 2:18 pm
Will get all of these sometime later today :) Thanks all for being so patient.
Last edited by Audy on Sat Jun 30, 2012 2:57 pm, edited 2 times in total.




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psudiname
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Thu May 24, 2012 10:13 pm
psudiname says... · Thu May 24, 2012 10:13 pm
here is the first chapter of the novel I'm working on. don't hold back.
work.php?id=95420




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Audy
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Fri Jun 29, 2012 3:36 am
Audy says... · Fri Jun 29, 2012 3:36 am
Doooone :) Anyone want to help me with my blue star?




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BluesClues
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Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:56 pm
BluesClues says... · Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:56 pm
I have a short story I wrote and then rewrote quite some time ago, if you're interested...

Dash it all, I was trying to link the title to the post, but it's been so long that I linked anything here that I don't remember how to do it...

Anyway, the title is "Drowning," I think I rated it a 16, or maybe a 12, and this is the link:

work.php?id=79095

Time for me to go write my own review of something...

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Karzkin
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Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:08 am
Karzkin says... · Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:08 am
Feeling existential?
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Carlito
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Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:59 pm
Carlito says... · Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:59 pm
Hi! This song of mine has no reviews yet and that makes me sad.
work.php?id=96239
Thanks much!!
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Rydia
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Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:35 am
Rydia says... · Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:35 am
Title: A Hero's Day Off
Genre: Narrative Poetry/ Satire
Link: work.php?id=96490

No rush dear, whenever you have the time <3
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Tenyo
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Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:57 am
Tenyo says... · Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:57 am
Audy! = D

Would you be able to review this if you get some spare time? It's the prologue to a fantasy novella. I'm mostly looking for ways to improve my prose in general, but also how it fares as a prologue / opening chapter.

work.php?id=96578
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ImHero
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 3:41 am
ImHero says... · Tue Jul 24, 2012 3:41 am
Will you review my poem for me?

work.php?id=96570

:) Thanks!
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Caesar
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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:21 pm
Caesar says... · Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:21 pm
Audy!

I would appreciate love your review of my first attempt at poetry!
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Audy
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 5:31 pm
Audy says... · Sat Dec 08, 2012 5:31 pm
Ita and ImHero - you're the first on my list. Will be getting to it as soon as I get off of work.


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VampireSenshi
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:49 pm
VampireSenshi says... · Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:49 pm
When you have the time :D

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DragonGirl11
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Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:28 am
DragonGirl11 says... · Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:28 am
I'd be ever so grateful if you'd review this - it's my first attempt at lyrics, and a rewrite of one of my other poems. I don't know if the lyrical part worked so well, though, especially the chorus XD
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