If you could be troubled, I'd appreciate a review of this, As it sits so far. It's the first chapter of my Futuristic/Trench Warfare/Post-apocalyptic WIP novel. It's Rated 18+ for Violence and Language Just to let you know. Thanks!
Would you be able to review this if you get some spare time? It's the prologue to a fantasy novella. I'm mostly looking for ways to improve my prose in general, but also how it fares as a prologue / opening chapter.
I'd be ever so grateful if you'd review this - it's my first attempt at lyrics, and a rewrite of one of my other poems. I don't know if the lyrical part worked so well, though, especially the chorus XD
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"You could look at the raindrops on your window, or you could look through the window and see the rainbow."
Thanks all for being so patient.
