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Hey cm57105, I am here to review this work for you and all I can say is..... wow. Somehow I've been drawn to creepy posts today, and this is certainly ...

Hey reowine, This is Zephion, here to review this awesome poem. First, you misspelled "perhaps" in the first line, not a big deal, you should just probably fix it. You ...

Hey anonymou5, This is Zephion, here to review this great (though VERY creepy) work for you. My first comment would be, wow. I like this, a lot. It was so ...

Hello Mystery Minder, This is Zephion, here to review this great work for you! My first comment is that you should really reformat this. One big block of text is ...

Ingrid! It at last time for me to return the favor and a review a work for you! First of all, I really like this poem, it's great! There is ...

Hey Youssefayman, This is Zephion, hear to review this wonderful work of yours. First of all, you may want to run a spell check on this, I noticed that you ...

Hey Jav! This is Zephion and I have the honor of reviewing this fine work today. First of all, it is an interesting idea, one that confuses me a bit, ...

Hey Adara, Cool poem, I understand what you mean. I can see a few things to fix though. For example in line 7, you spell the word therapist incorrectly. Easy ...

Hey Jade, Zeph here, finally able to return the favor and give you a review! Okay, so keep in mind, I haven't read the rest of your novel, so I'm ...

Hey Epic, First to review, hooray! This is really good, the pacing is excellent and the word choice is just amazing. A bit creepy, but creepy is good! I can't ...

The ending was awesome first of all, I didn't see it coming. You might want to mention something about being able to breathe in the beginning though, because In Greek ...

Hey Poem, This is great. I think you've done an awesome job. The beat, the description, everything, I just love it. The only thing I would change is in the ...

Hey Dally, Cool poem, very simple, but that's part of what makes it so great. I don't see anything here to critique, but I like the style and the format ...

Hey Disk, Um, wow. This is really cool. I'm afraid that I got caught up in the story and didn't nitpick very hard, so I don't really have anything I ...

Hey Alex, This is a great start, but I encourage you to fix a few things. First of all, you tend to switch between Even and Evan. You should probably ...