Hey cm57105,
I am here to review this work for you and all I can say is..... wow. Somehow I've been drawn to creepy posts today, and this is certainly one of them. I like it, I like it a lot. I can't really come up with much to say other than I loved this poem. The imagery, the wording, everything was excellent. I wish I could write poetry like that (or at all really), and my hat is off to you for a stupendous job. I think that you would have even more success if you made this into a longer poem. Adding a few stanzas of actually taking a life. You mention killing in general here, but perhaps if you were to add a more personal death this wonderful poem would be even better. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
Zephion
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