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Wow that is depressing but fastenating. The description you use is fabulous. It feels like you have really gotten into it and really now what it is like. I love your work please post more oh and can you review the story catching clues.
Hey thanks, and i'll definitely review your story!
Hey Adara,
Cool poem, I understand what you mean. I can see a few things to fix though. For example in line 7, you spell the word therapist incorrectly. Easy mistake and not a big deal, but should probably be fixed anyway. Something else I might do to this poem is break it up into stanzas. I know, kind of a short poem to do that with, but I think the reader would get a lot more out of it if you did that. And even if you didn't want to do that you could put a space between the rest of the poem and the last line, I think that would make it look cool. Anyway, great poem and keep writing. Thanks!
-Zephion
hey thanks, yeah ill fix that spelling error asap, and what do you mean? jus have it in a paragraph form and have the last line separate from the rest?