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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The Candle

    Hi, i'm max and im here to give a review. I loved this poem a lot i love how every stanza the words rhyme at the end of the stanza. ...

    Aug 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: 911

    hi frined! this was a mix of emotions, the begging when she called 911 over the heart break, the dispathers response was funny in a way, when she went into ...

    Aug 18, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i will bury you in time

    thank you for your poem i loved it, i love how the poem is read like it is coming from your heart, you can tell all the words came from ...

    Aug 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: 818 words about life, death, and rebirth.

    i love this a lot its really good, the colors throw me off a bit but it doesnt change much on how i read it everyone that worked on this ...

    Aug 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Humor Re: therapy song

    I really love how this rhymes a lot i love how its realistical and its good, its a good song, i love how it switches to different disorders and the ...

    Aug 17, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Kind Boy

    One of the strengths of this piece lies in its ability to evoke deep emotions through its imagery and language. The use of metaphors, such as "the blade in my ...

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Forest Sunset

    Your description beautifully captures the intertwining of nature's beauty with the ethereal quality of music, particularly the song "Je Te Laisserai Des Mots." The imagery of a forest with towering ...

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untold Love Story poem by Allahrazi Rajput

    Your poetry beautifully captures the wistful longing and ache of missing someone dearly. The imagery of blossoms erupting on the streets, symbolizing renewal and warmth, juxtaposed with the narrator's

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i visited our childhood home (you weren't in it)

    Your writing is incredibly evocative, painting a vivid picture of loss and nostalgia. It captures the bittersweet essence of returning to a place filled with memories of someone who is ...

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: for "you"

    Your poem is a poignant exploration of the complexities inherent in human relationships, where desire and expectation often collide with reality. The repetition of "anything for you" underscores a sen

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Don't Frame Love

    I've seen a lot of poems but this one is the best. Your heartfelt words resonate deeply, echoing the complexities of love's journey. It's clear you're navigating uncharted waters, grappling ...

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: unwittingly buried beneath mirth

    Hey, I'm here to leave my review! this was an amazing poem, the words you use to describe things and the topic is all so perfect and it fits together ...

    Feb 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: roses are red [just like the blood i spilt over you]

    This has got to be my favorite poem. I love how you spaced things out and put things off to the side for a more unique effect. and I love ...

    Feb 9, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Marcia Blythe’s dear love: Part One

    took me a bit to read which is amazing and I LOVE THIS SO MUCH its my favorite on here. you did amazing on it and I love the characters ...

    Jan 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Midnight Witch x Y/N’s adventure: Part Two

    I love a fantasy book, overall this book was amazing I love the hard work put into it and it shows how much you have put into it. The characters ...

    Jan 18, 2024


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