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Wow, this is really, good, I enjoyed it a lot. I have always liked darker things like this, but this, it was just great, I really liked it. The theme ...

I agree with Catnip, this is cute and beautiful. I think, this is what people go through in their life. I love how you've written this piece so wonderfully with ...

I really liked this, it real mystical, I like that. Its very very very very short, ahaha. But good! Really good. I think that maybe you could've added some more ...

Wow, I just, this *has no words* I am really into things like this, so it really caught my eye and dragged me in. I know the feels to this ...

This poem is very short, but it is really conveying what you are trying to say. Simple poems are always my favourite, especially when they are like this one. The ...

I agree, this is more of a shot poem. Its very good. I enjoyed reading, it's really showing the point of what teens think about themselves. I just think, maybe ...

They poem really does tell the reader how much you love to ride you skateboarding. And that nothing will stop you from riding it cause you enjoy do this so ...

This is a great poem. It's extremely sad to hear about your Grandmother, my condolences. Death, could possible be the worst thing in our lives. Its everywhere. It is also ...

Wow, this was great. I almost started crying. Probably because of the fact that I am way to over emotional. I'm gonna give you a nice review, mainly because, I ...

Firstly, I have never been a dance and reading this is making me glad I'm not. Not that your writing is bad, I quite like it. I'm one of those ...

Firstly, Oh My Glob, I love Adventure Time

Hiyo! I'm here, to try to give you a review. "The night is quiet and still. The stars are sleepy, though plain. " I was captured! I love how these ...

Hello, there c: This was something different, but I really did like it. "Shifting his eyes to his surroundings, the boy saw the rocky outcrop the cave, the never-ending cave. ...

First, Hello there! And Wow.. just wow.. I love mermaids and this was just, well awesome C: It had a good build up to the end. It left me wanting ...

First stories.. Never know if they are good enough aye..? c: But, I did like this, the names where good, my favorite being Landon. It was really interesting, I like ...