I love it. It is indeed short, but length is not the issue. I mean there are six word memoirs. They tell an entire story in six words. Anywho, I liked it's simplicity. As long as you get what you want the meaning to be you can make it as short as you want. As for the reader they probably want more. They want to understand it in its entirety. I guess what I'm saying it is good. It's nice and short, but as a reader I'd like to know more. I also like the ambiguity of it. To me it gave off an air of mystery.
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