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Re: Expressing Technology
Hey there! I am Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! :) Sorry this review is later than expected! :( Comments Great job over all, I like how ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: Technology; Molding the Future
Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! Sorry it was a later review than expected! :( Comments Just from glancing at it, why do you ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: Technology, Life and Humanity
Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! :) Comments Great job with this article! I am very proud of you for your organization and topic ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Total Technology Takeover
Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! Comments Interesting hook, brought me into the article. You did a good job on most of your topic ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: In Search for Ease
Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! :) Comments I really like the article! You did a wonderful job with many things throughout this, though ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Gazing into the future
Hey there! I'm Onyx, I will be reviewing your article today! :D Comments I really like it, it is very interesting! You did a wonderful job describing the different ways ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Proving at Present the Countless Use of Technology
Hey there! I will be reviewing your article today. :) Comments Very good. You did a good job in explaining yourself through the different ideas of technology and how they ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Technology at Its Sweetest Consequence
Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today. :) Comments I liked your article, you give very good information. I was very interested at the beginning, ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Desperado
Hey there, I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your poetry today. :) Over all Over all, I loved it! I think you did a great job with your structure. ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: What do you do?
Hey there! Onyx is here to review your poem! :D Okay, over view, I like it. I like those you keep the same structure with the two lines throughout the ...
Sep 27, 2013 -
Re: Life
Hey there! I'll be reviewing your poem this lovely morning. :) Well so far, I love it. I like how you choose your words and keep everything down. Though I ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: I Still... (The Unspoken Words)
Hey there! I will be reviewing your piece of work today! :) Comments You did a great job writing this poem. I like it a lot, I do have a ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: How I Love You
Hey there! I will be reviewing your work today! :) Overall Comments You did a great job on this poem. I love how in depth you are with your scenery. ...
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: Truths and Trials [16+ Language]
Hey there! I will be reviewing this piece of work today! I like the poem, your word choice fits for this kind of poem. You did great! You have a ...
Jan 26, 2013 -
Re: Amour
Hey there! I will be reviewing your piece of work today! I have to say, you did amazing at this poem. I can tell the tone and mood of how ...
Jan 26, 2013