In Search for Ease

by unicolharsen

Published October 1, 2013

E - Everyone

In In Search for Ease

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One-third of married couples in the U.S met online (Cacioppone, 2013). It only proves that technology has made and will make further great impact on our lives. Technology continues to work its magic in improving human life making further advancements to the world and human society towards sustainable development for mankind. Humans develop new and efficient tools and machineries for functional and efficient work. The purpose of these products of technology is to lighten the work of people in order to have a convenient life. Technological advancements and developments can be seen in the fields such as in education, communication, and transportation.

Technology is a great tool in improving education. It presents various ways of advancing teaching efficiency such as the use of audio-visual presentations, projectors, and televisions which help the teachers to have the full attention of their students making them more focus on the subject while letting the teachers to have more time to interact with the students. “In these ways, the challenge of making the comprehension level among students at its highest is achievable.” (Pond, 2013) Technology also provides easy access to school’s facilities. Online viewing of grades can now be done. Enrollment can now be done online. Finding researches is made faster through the new systems introduced to the schools’ libraries. Students use their smartphones and tablets in browsing information because of its mobility, portability and ease of use. Therefore, advancements in technology does not only provides convenience but also enhancing students skills in today’s technical know-how enabling them to have the knowledge and a chance to be one of the future generation of leaders.

Technology establishes a network of people from anywhere in the world enriching relations through communication. Citizens are getting updated to the latest news and happenings around the globe through media reports featured on televisions. It brings you news as it happens. People can now buy things from other countries through online shopping. “Using the internet for retail has become so commonplace that for many, added benefits of convenience, easy research ability, and price comparison tools outweigh the effort required to physically visit the traditional bricks-and-mortar store.” (Handyside, 2012) technology brings people closer to the world. Anyone can freely send e-mails or contact their families and loved ones who are in other country through cellphones and computers. “Rather than sending individual notes, social networking provides a constant stream of updates and information. These computer tools have taken communication a step further than email due to their ability to instantly communicate life and status updates to an entire network of people who can respond and comment to such notes in real time.” (Victor, 2011) Therefore, technology serves as a channel to voice out individual ideas opinions, to be involved in the circulation, to interact to the world.

Technology aids in an organized and efficient work through having an easy way of transportation. It provides convenience in time management. Workers come in time to their working places by means of fast moving vehicles, therefore giving more time for longer hours of labor. “With sufficient supports in communication and machines, people can lessen their work hours at the same time optimize their work efficiency and effectiveness.”(Nefertete, 2010) Travelers can now move easily from one place to another anywhere in the world. Nowadays, aircrafts are available which can make your journey shorter from one country to another. “So, all transportation means invented with the support of technology really brings people easiness of traveling.” (Oska, 2008)

In summary, technology plays a very important role in education, communication and transportation. It serves as a tool in learning which helps for the betterment of education for children. Also, it establishes good interpersonal relationship among people in the world. Moreover, technology offers other modes of transportation and it was utilized for convenience. Technology provides great assistance, therefore improving the society as a whole even though there are some certain repercussions and negative impact of technology as well. The world became a better place to live in. Thanks to these advancements. A bright future awaits to the present generation of children.

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NatsuDragneel Comment
NatsuDragneel commented Comment · Oct 3, 2013

Your topic is very interesting. The content is excellent. Nice job. Keep it up. :D

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KayleMission Comment
KayleMission commented Comment · Oct 3, 2013

I like your hook sentence, "One-third of married couples in the U.S met online (Cacioppone, 2013)." I didn't know that until I read your essay.

Another, I like the way you insert your citations and connect it with our own ideas.

I would prefer if you use more transitional devices in order to have a better flow of ideas.

Your conclusion really has everything that you put in your thesis statement.

Overall, excellent essay and very informative. Job Well Done! :)

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gracenati09 commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

This article is so good and very impressive! Keep up the good work! :)

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kingteejay8 Comment
kingteejay8 commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

I love it. You've made an excellent essay. Job well done. :D

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shielamendoza Comment
shielamendoza commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

A very informative one! :))

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perkypanda commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

Great essay! :)

krizshelbenalycabral wrote a review Review · Oct 2, 2013

Your title is catchy. And so is your first sentence, which is also very interesting. You also have a good word choice. Your conclusion is good, but I guess you should combine the last two sentences, or maybe you just had a mistake of putting a period instead of a comma. You pointed out your details clearly, and your examples supported your ideas. Nice job! Keep up the good work :)

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akosisab Comment
akosisab commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

I like your introduction, and your points.

"Technology establishes a network of people from anywhere in the world enriching relations through communication." - I really like this sentence, this is my favorite sentence ..

You pointed it well, your ideas are nice,
overall I agree with your essay . .Good Job, keep it up ..:)

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Euclarkie commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

Very well said. Not bad. Thanks a lot. :D

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christiantiquis Comment
christiantiquis commented Comment · Oct 2, 2013

Nice essay. :D

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charles23mds Comment
charles23mds commented Comment · Oct 1, 2013

Nice one. I like your essay. Keep up the good work.

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kedjil wrote a review Review · Oct 1, 2013

"One-third of married couples in the U.S met online." - This is a very powerful hook. I bet that only a few know this.

You might also want to consider adding more transitional devices to have a smoother flow of discussion.

"television" - (Second paragraph, second sentence) You can change it to something more modern.

"Online viewing of grades can now be done. Enrollment can now be done online." - You can combine these two sentences because it is somehow parallel to each other.

Good use of quotations in every part of your article is very evident.
Your article is so positive and I learned a lot from it. Keep up the good work!

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Messenger wrote a review Review · Oct 1, 2013

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room.
So, first off welcome to YWS!! Hope you really like this site, and get some good help from it. If you have questions just about everyone one here is willing to answer them. Now, onto your essay.
This was the best one I've seen on here yet. I haven't read all of the technology posts, yet but this one talked about something the others essays I read, didn't. You talked about transportation. I think for most part when someone hers the word technology, then they think computers, gaming systems and phones. But there is actually a lot more. Glad you explored that.
Also, Is aw no punctuation problems, and only one line, which another reviewers pointed out, that I found awkward. Good job overall.
Keep it up!

whitewolfpuppy wrote a review Review · Oct 1, 2013

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! :)

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I really like the article! You did a wonderful job with many things throughout this, though I only pointed out a few. So here are a few things that I would like to point out. Of course, this is just my opinion. You, by no means, have to do these changes. You can keep it as it is if you see it fit.

One-third of married couples in the U.S met online (Cacioppone, 2013).

Very interesting, I didn't know that!

It only proves that technology has made and will make further great impact on our lives.

Some reason, this sounds a little funny to me. It could be the words are in an awkward formation or what. You might need to look at that.

Technology is a great tool in improving education.

Maybe add a little flair to this topic sentence, it is interesting but for me it does not want to bring me in officially. You know what I mean?

“In these ways, the challenge of making the comprehension level among students at its highest is achievable.” (Pond, 2013)

Great job stating and using quotations here!

Online viewing of grades can now be done. Enrollment can now be done online.

Maybe combine these two sentences into one? If not, it still works the way it is. :)

technology brings people closer to the world.

I believe the "T" in "technology" is supposed to be capitalized.

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Great job with your conclusion! You did very well with tying it back to your thesis statement! A thing I would add is the citations. I would always add citations anywhere when you are writing an article or essay. That way the audience or reader knows where you got your information and whether or not you are creditable. Also, maybe add a bit of pathos in your article. Adding a bit of emotion will pull the audience or reader closer to the essay. Though you did a wonderful job with logos and ethos. It won't hurt to add some, if not, you are still good either way! If you have any questions or reasons why I said something I did. Feel free to message me and we can chat about it! Can't wait to read some more from you soon! Thank you for your time,
~Onyx

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1234evermore commented Comment · Oct 1, 2013

Very well said. Organization of ideas have maintained. Keep up the good work.



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