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  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: Masked With Innocence

    Hey, So when I saw this i didn't feel it as a poem but when I read this, I haven't really read such an amazing poem in a long while ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Two

    Hey, Look who's here to review you submission :D Can I say i love this? Can I say that? Because I actually loved it! First of all let's consider the ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Those Left Behind (2012 ed)

    Hey Aley, It's your Santa again. I wonder if I am going to get addicted to your poems too because this was just wonderful! The plot on which this was ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Summer Lady

    Hey, Your (not so amazing) secret Santa here (not so secret anymore XD) So I read this piece and wow, this was so so so so amazing. I loved the ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: wander fish

    Hey, Umaima here to review your amazing poem. Goodness I'm seeing so many great poems today! This was a great piece and I really enjoyed reading it. Now coming to ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A New Road

    Hey AONARS, Umaima here to review your masterpiece. Goodness this poem is really great. I must say you are a very very very talented poet! I loved the plot. Each ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Invisible.

    Hey PepsiCola, Wow! What a fantastic poem. Goodness I just keep reading poems and everyone just keeps surprising me with there amazing ones! This is the type of poem which ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: A New World

    Hey, Umaima here for reviewing this really awesome piece. Goodness so many awesome poets on this site! I just can't get enough of reading of all these poems. First of ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Our best on Offer

    Hey Azzman, Umaima here to review your wonderful poem. First of all I would like to tell you that your poem was a-m-a-z-i-n-g and goodness great idea here. The plot ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Dark Blue Eyes

    Hey Roxy11, First of all I would like to welcome you on YWS. It is amazing how YWS is getting so many amazing poets these days. This was a amazing ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Loneliness

    Hey RBT00, Umaima here for your review. It was a great poem and I enjoyed reading it. Seriously, I cans ee that you are a very talented writer. Great job ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: TOMORROW : Chapter 6

    Hey Annapurna, First of all this was a masterpiece... I loved the plot and the storyline. Keep it up. I mean after reading this chapter i felt like to read ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: Life After Death : Chapter 1

    Hey sidra, here to comment on your piece. First of all, I loved it. This is marvelous though there are some areas wher eyou have to grow but I bet ...

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Fantsy Land: The Book Of Storm-Light.

    Hey J, First of all great plot, awesome story and keep it up! You are so improving in spellings and your grammar, work on it, a lot. Just a few ...

    Jun 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Heroine of Jiendia

    Hey gee77, First of all I think this piece needs a massive editing. The plot's nice, way of writing is good to but it has to many [] thingee. (Don't ...

    Jun 11, 2013


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