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Hey, Vamp! I noticed you're always lurking somewhere on my stories... I think it's time I do the same. Starting with this!! First Impressions: This story starts off rather cold ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I have a few words that might help you a bit..... First Impressions: Reading through your story, I noticed that you stuck strong to implacing ...

Hey there! Taost here to share some words! First Impressions: The first thing can can be noticed with this work is the old, some would say broken or Shakespearean, English. ...

Hey there! I'm here to give this a little review! So, from first reading this, I quickly realized that this piece was not what I thought it would be. My ...

Hey there! Coming in for a short review! First thoughts: While reading this, I noticed several parts where I thought, "Hmm.. This doesn't rhyme.." But then somehow, you tweaked it ...

Hey there! I got a few tips that could help you out! Overall, for your first story, this is lovely! It sits nice and it reminds me of a fairy ...

Hey there! Coming in for a little review! The words in this poem strike a chord within me. I have had my fair share of girls whom I have loved ...

Hey! Overall, the big feel of this poem is like the beginning of a fairytale. Similar to the beginning of Romeo&Juliet. When Shakespeare spoke of fair Verona, you spoke of ...

Hey there! I'm here to write a short review for this gorgeous piece! So far, the main motive on this is unclear and it seems to speak more on how ...

Hey! This piece, at first, starts off sweet. Then it gets darker and painful. It describes a betrayal from someone once loved. I'm sure that's a pain most of us ...

Heyyy! So, for starters, I love how this is written. It works through, telling the narrative of a person, most likely a gay man/boy, who wants to love another who ...

Hey there! I honestly just wanna start this off by saying how stunning this poetic piece is. It speaks truth and it holds a feeling of pain. That want and ...

Hey there! So for starters, this poem starts off interesting. The introduction reads of someone inflicting pain upon our narrator, which sets us into a gory, harsh like scene. For ...

Hey there! This is a heavy thing to talk about, but it's the honest truth. People don't understand, and we can't force them to. It's hard to explain feelings, but ...

Hey! I'm gonna do a little, light review on this! There isn't much to say. This definitely has some feeling into this work, and it's felt and seen. The way ...