thePoeToaster43

I like this poem, but it takes on the form of a love letter. I love the many metaphors and what not, and don't get me wrong, it's a nice ...

As simple as this is, it makes a great poetic piece! You truly made it work! Gallagher was indeed a funny man, what with the smashing of things. And I ...

Simply splendid! I hope your teacher wasn't to worried about you after this... You know how petty adults can be when someone "young" speaks of insanity. It's quite funny to ...

I like this! It kind of sums up the feelings you get when you're trying to impress someone. (Not that you are). I especially love the line, "surrounded by plastic ...

The last two lines made chills explode through my body. It is absolutely amazing, that you not only create a piece that relates to the women of today, but you ...

I am officially in love with this poem. I usually don't take the time to sit back and read long poems, and review them afterwords... But this is brilliant. You've ...

PLEASE DON'T MISUNDERSTAND WHAT I'M ABOUT TO SAY. Please read through this review completely and try to understand... While I love this and see the truth in it, (and the ...

I can't find a better word to describe this poem with, other than FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC. It kind of makes you think about things. It personally made me think about how the ...

This poem is beautiful! I love how it brings forth the presence of a rhyme scheme, yet there is not one to be found. It kind of emphasizes the beauty ...

Hey, I really like this poem! It reminds me of an assignment I had to do in back in 8th grade. I feel as if you were giving us, as ...

Perfectly captures the child like fears we all experience at some point in life. I love the words you use to describe everything! I also love how you only subtly ...

Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. You've obviously been hurt, and captured those emotions perfectly in this poem. I love the metaphors you've used to represent the friendship you once had. How it ...

Wow, you really captured the thoughts of religious people. Speaking to the Lord, yet not knowing if he's truly there. I love the way it's worded and all together special ...

This poetic style is new to me. But I kind of like it. I almost feel as if you're saying it to me, and trying to describe the experience you're ...

Hey, While I find the poem beautiful, I do have to say that it doesn't seem to flow to well. I see the point you're trying to make and I ...