thePoeToaster43

Can't find anything to complain about... as per-usual. So I guess I'll just have to give you the cold, harsh, terrifying truth. I love it. LOVE IT. You've captured the ...

I'm going to be completely and horribly honest. When I first started reading, I did not like it whatsoever. Then I read more... And more, and thought "okay." AND THEN ...

I see a few grammatical errors that should be fixed. Not the kind that you may have intended, but the "oops, my finger slipped" kind. Other than that, it's a ...

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS. You've truly gotten your point out in my book. Someone's hurt you, but you feel as if you've done nothing to deserve it. no? All I ...

The one thing I don't quite agree with, and I mean this in the kindest way possible, is that it doesn't come off like a true poem. Perhaps it fits ...

Was this perhaps based on a dream/ nightmare? I mean that in a good way. Some of the best short stories. (OR even full length books) are based off of ...

Why does the child like simplicity of this speak to me? It makes me want to hug my mom, even though she didn't do much of this with me... That's ...

I feel as if this poem entertained a part of me that nothing else can reach out to. I got emotional as if I were standing near the situation, and ...

From what the other comment says, this poem is short and beautiful. I don't TRULY trust google translate (or any other translator for that matter.) But I like it. I ...

I hope this doesn't come off harsh. I feel horrible when I disagree with someone's work of art. Everyone has their own interpretation of poetry. Just like everyone has their ...

How can I be sure you're not a professional? This work was amazing! How in the WORLD did you come about the inspiration AND imagination to put such scenes, and ...

I usually don't agree with "overly poetic" pieces... But I think it really works with this. I love your detailed descriptions. You used so many of what I like to ...

Honestly, I'm not quite sure what to make of this. But by all means, that is in no way a bad thing. You should take it as a compliment that ...

OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS! This is probably one of the most beautiful "new age" poems I've read in the longest time! It was so poetically unpoetic that I fell in ...

SPLENDID! You've created a poem with a perfect mix of personification and metaphors! Most people tend to overdo one or the other, or even both. And not to mention, the ...