sunlightwarriorxo

Hi, Sunlight Warrior here with a review! I love this poem - what a fantastic job you've done writing it! What an interesting concept you've established also - I've never ...

Hi, Sunlight Warrior here with a review! What an intriguing poem you have written here! The conflicting narrative that you have employed is very effective - you encapture the narrator ...

Hi, Sunlight Warrior here with a review! This is an incredible poem, so you should truly be proud of it! Your work has perfectly captured the complications of being thirteen ...

Hi, Sunlight Warrior here with a review! Firstly, well done! You have written a fantastic poem, with a simple message, but such powerful words. I love the fact that you've ...

Hi, Wow - this a fantastic poem, I love your imagery and the depth that you go, whilst exploring your speaker's reminiscence. I love your varied format, I thought that ...

Hi, This is an interesting poem you have here - the emotions that you are conveying here are very heartfelt however personally for me, I feel as though they lack ...

Hi, This is a great song - the flow of your lines read better as a song rather than a poem. I LOVE the woodland imagery you've used - maybe ...

Wow, this is beautiful! A lot of people will be able to relate to this poem - I feel as though you have crafted a poem which explores a thought ...

Hi, I loved this poem - creatives everywhere, especially artists and sewers will be able to relate to this feeling, I even do as a writer! Your imagery really logs ...

Hi! I love this poem - you really explore the motions of life here. I love your imagery also, you feel as though that you are the speaker reciting this ...

Hi, This is a great poem, I love your language and imagery - you feel as though you're the character experiencing a moment of reflection - which especially seeing as ...

Wow! This is a great poem you have here - you really explore the feeling of love and the feleing of being in a relationship with someone you think the ...

Hi, Sunlightwarriorxo here! Now considering you said it was your first time writing a novel - I think you smashed it! What a fantastic opening! Your language, characterisation and dialogue ...

This is a great chapter - you've crafted a great piece of writing with good themes, imagery, characterisation and dialogue that really resonates with the scene that you're trying to ...

Hi, This is a great poem - I love the time imagery you have here, it feels as though that you've crafted a reflective poem here: I feel like time ...