starlitmind

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here :D If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask! This is quite a nice poem! It's ...

Hey there! I really really like this poem! I remember reading one of your other ones, and I enjoyed both of them very much! You have some lovely descriptions going ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS :D I hope you enjoy it here. If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It's quite ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here :D If you have any questions, feel free to ask! This is a really good poem! It's very ...

Hey there! I love the topic of this poem. It's very consistent and flows nicely. I like the way you elaborated on the first line of each stanza. I particularly ...

Hey there! This is quite an interesting poem. You use different comparisons, which make the poem more enjoyable to read. I liked you comparing yourself to "a vessel of good ...

Hey there! I agree with LittleLee, your title is pretty cool! Different people have different opinions on the importance of a title, but to me, it's almost as important as ...

Hey there! Wow, this is quite a dark, sinister, and twisted story! The ending was quite spooky; I enjoyed that twist! You did a good job making this story dark ...

Hey there! This is quite an interesting piece. I liked the way you described loneliness. Your prisoner comparison was probably my favourite! I have a few things I'd like to ...

Hey there! This is quite a lovely poem. It's heartbreaking, and I love the title. I always think titles are very important, and yours is quite intriguing. I loved reading ...

Hey there! This is a nice and enjoyable poem about expectations. I'm sure a lot of this is relatable to many readers; it's nice when the readers are able to ...

Hey there! I absolutely love this story xD It's cute, fun, refreshing, and unique. You also have quite good descriptions, especially when describing some of the chickens. I loved the ...

Hey there! I think this is a cute and simple short story. You have a nice title; it instantly caught my attention, as I'm sure it did others, since you ...

Hey there! This is quite an interesting poem. It's unique and one of a kind. I enjoyed reading it! I have a few things I'd like to point out. These ...

Hey there! This is a really fun and cute short story! I love the noodle time cx I have a few things I'd like to point out, if you don't ...