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My heart is full of good intention and you are surely a beautiful butterfly, so don't take these words in a harsh way. Maybe if this were put to some ...

There's something both really abstract and really concrete here about this poem, all to the point of me being like, "I think I like it." I'm weary on poetry, that's ...

Have you ever seen a movie called Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind? Well... yeah. Anyway, I have a lot to say about this. I'm sort of immediately turned off ...

So this was pleasant. Just a very smooth ride, which in poetry can be a difficult thing to achieve. So, that being said, I'm going to take a few nitpicks ...

I didn't think I was going to like this, but it ended up like that. I kind of wish you could expand on it. I understand it's supposed to be ...

I just don't get it. Maybe it's my own ignorance. Maybe it's Maybelline. But we'll just proceed. I enjoy the obscure visions of darker poetry [that Dickinson girl is bomb], ...

This really doesn't say much to me. I think this perception is summed up in "Life is life." But, like, what IS life? I mean, you're writing a poem about ...

I love it. The ONE thing I have to say is if we're watching from outside the script, we don't know anyone's names besides Joffery and Markus. If this were ...

Greetings. I have to say it's certainly not atrocious, and while I would have to agree with Flow for a large bit of this review, I'll elaborate on a few ...

I like it, in general. There's nothing really to dislike about it other than the feeling that it's really lacking a lot of what it could possibly contain. I mean, ...

A few things: I'm pretty sure amusement parks don't open as early as 8 am. Usually around 10-11 ish. "She was holding a little and the most innocent and adorable ...

You know, it's simple, but I kind of like that. It's a little generic of a topic, but it feels genuine and I like that too. A lot of poems ...

Contradicting what Kaylyn says, no, you do not need any periods and commas. It might frustrate some readers because they think that sort of thing applies to poetry but the ...

Hm... OK. It's a little stiff. That might be the word I'm looking for. Or heavy, but not the emotional kind of heavy, but like the "I want this poem ...

Commas do not equal breaths or pauses. There are far too many in here, and it's making me feel like an asthmatic while I read this. You have good structure, ...