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Re: The Sounds of Harmonies
Hey there Kat here to review for Team WHY? I am totally freaking out . FLAWLESS !!! That first stanza and last stanza, the way you flipped it but kept ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: We Deserve Better
Kat here to Review for Team WHY? on the marvelous review day! Wow this describes young love so well. And my past experiences...and present? Maybe. I hope not because that ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Letter to the weather
Hey there Kat here a reviewing machine for team WHY? Second to last line, if should be of . Can I just say I love rainy days :D the way ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: The reaper's night- first draft
Kat for team WHY? this review day :) um wow that was creepy...um... So I noticed you said this is your first draft ? Let's get to it then ! ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Don't Do It
And out cranks another review for Team WHY? I just kinda picked you and am reviewing your stuff. Heh ... This was so tragic and depressing , I pictured two ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: With Him
Hey there Kat here to review Oh this was marvelous :) you have a new fan ! I am a sucker for romantic poems and you seem to hit the ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: A(r)mor
This has been a very long review day for me and it just started . Go Team WHY? This is the best poem I have read all day :) I ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Is it better to have her but not be with her?
Hey there Kat here to review for Team WHY? Aw this is really really really sad because I can relate . I loved this person dearly but there was a ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: My Name is ____ and I'm an Alcoholic
Hello , you requested a review from the famous Kat of Team WHY? (I'm not really famous) Let's get down to business. Not going to nag you about capitalization but ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Remember, please
Hey there Kat here for a review! 12 ! Wow so great to see young writers :) says the person only three years older (I'm so old). Anyways, I thought ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: An expected, Unexpected suprise
Hey there Kat here to review for team WHY? Oh what a nice title , it makes sense in this piece the way you tied it in. Kind of intimidated ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: The Mark of Music
Hey there Kat again for another review for Team WHY? I just love music so I had to read this, I play flute. Again with a rhyme scheme :3 might ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: A Horse's Love
Kat here to review for Team WHY? Okay so little things, your rhyme scheme wasn't constant and that bothered me and interrupted your flow quite a lot. Try breaking it ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: The Box
Welcome to YWS :) AH so she is a ballerina in a music box. How interesting. Reviewing for Team WHY? The talent on this site never ceases to amaze me, ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: C'est la vie
Oh My Gosh! You joined YWS on my 14th birthday :D Sorry, *ahem* Review yes that. Firstly, WHAT AN AMAZING SET UP AND FLOW :D really smooth read didn't distract ...
May 31, 2015