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Re: Sick Day
Hey there Kat here to review for ya! Nothing like a good romance poem to get me back in the review game and I must say this was indeed quite ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Happy Birthday!
Ya this is really cute. I could almot taste the marble cake XD lol At first I thought "it's just gonna be -happy birthday to you happy birthday to you-" ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: It's Strange
That's love for you, painful and doesn't bear any fruit. Really tragic :'( I liked the poem though and it had a lot of feelings but I felt like it ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Determination
Oh my god yes ! this is how I feel 24/7 and I could hardly tell that this was your first work! You accuratley described how people like me feel ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Questions...
Hello there Planve Kat here to review for ya ;) Let me just first say that this was wonderful ( especially considering you posted this from a NOT Iphone ). ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Lights
Hey fortis long time no YWS ;) This was beautiful! I had never really thought about lights like this before =D very creative. I loved how you used the light ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: You Let Me Fall
Hey there, loevlysayshi has a lot of great pointers for you! So I won't repeat all that.... I really liked this and felt it was a very relatable topic and ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: The Nothing We Have
Hey! The reason behind this poem, in my opinion, was hard to grasp. I didn't really see what you were getting at and it felt like a lot of fragments ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Music
Hey! I'm very suprised ! I thought this was gonna be a flow nightmare because all the lines were either really long or short but it actually flowed real well! ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Dying to be Beautiful
Hello there Kat here to review. A couple fixes and this piece will really be flawless! 1. second stanza second line you are missing a comma. 2.second to last stanza ...
Jun 8, 2013 -
Re: Some of my Poems
Hey, I was drawn here by your avatar (Link for the win!) Cool we are the same age! I thought this was dripping with romance throughout and really heart felt ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Your Broken Friend
Hey there Speakerskat here to review for you ! I can really relate to this because I sometimes wonder if my friends are really my friends (especially after I just ...
Jun 4, 2013 -
Re: How Long?
Hello there MindBlown! Well asI told you earlier, I really love this poem and feel that it really potrays your peron deeply and with powerful emotion.The second to last stanza ...
Jun 2, 2013 -
Re: A True Writer
Hey there Social Suicide! Nicley done. This is actually how I feel as a writer, like I'm trapped all other ways except when I'm writing. " And there isn't a ...
Jun 1, 2013 -
Re: Love Part 2: Distorted
Hey there Chewy, Kat's older sister here to write a review for her . This is what she says It was really good but felt unfinished and didn't really tie ...
May 31, 2013
