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Re: PEHLI AASHQUI KA GUM
Hello! I put this through google translate so it might be a bit off but I am still here to review! I am Sophie by the way! So lets get ...
Sun Feb 24, 2019 6:58 pm -
Re: thought farts
Hey! My name is Sophie and I am here to review your work! This poem is so amazing as it contains so much emotion! I love the format of it ...
Sun Feb 24, 2019 6:50 pm -
Re: Blame
Hi reaganmcchristy!! It Sophie here to review your piece! ~ Like the others said, I think it is a brilliant idea to have the works cited because it gives credit ...
Fri Dec 14, 2018 12:07 pm -
Re: run run rfid
Hey friend! Its Sophie here to review your work! ~ Stanza numero uno!!!! ~ this is a nice start but I feel like its very action filled to start. it ...
Sun Dec 09, 2018 5:18 pm -
Re: My Tower Of Strength
Sophie here to review! ~ this is so powerful and meaningful! I love it so much. I love how at first, this tower of strength seems to be an object ...
Wed Nov 07, 2018 11:23 am -
Re: When time glitches
Hi! Sophie here to review! ~ the beginning is such a good hook. it gives an explanation of the story and then boom! you're in it. one thing is, I ...
Tue Nov 06, 2018 12:07 pm -
Re: 3818919
Hi! Sophie here to review! ~ this is such a common feeling among people. The longing and loss caught within this is so much. the only thing is that I ...
Mon Nov 05, 2018 11:16 pm -
Re: What Do You Do?
Hi! Sophie here to review your piece! ~ First stanza!- This is very filled with anger. it is a feeling that is bottling up inside and the reader wants to ...
Mon Nov 05, 2018 10:49 pm -
Re: M.A.D.I.S.O.N
Sophie here for a quick review! ~ This is super cute and caring and i bet your friend will love it! ~ M-this part is super selfless and i love ...
Mon Nov 05, 2018 9:38 pm -
Re: As Much as Night Follows Daylight
Sophie here to review! I love this sooooo much! it has such a sad misery feeling. the longing is so strong that I feel it as im reading it and ...
Mon Nov 05, 2018 12:03 pm -
Re: good day / bad day
Hi sophie here to review! ~ First sections!-this really captures the feelings of getting out of bed! I remember and feel both sides! It’s so relatable and that just makes ...
Sun Nov 04, 2018 12:33 pm -
Re: It's Not Just A Game !
Hi! Is sophie here for a review! ~ This is a really nice message and I enjoyed reading this. It has a nice rhyme scheme. The story line in this ...
Sun Nov 04, 2018 3:42 am -
Re: The suns hot burst
Hello! Sophie here to review your poem! ~ First section stanza thing-I love this but is it supposed to say “the sun’s” I might be wrong because I’m bad at ...
Sun Nov 04, 2018 3:35 am -
Re: everything's burning
Sophie here to review! ~ the beginning is super mysterious and beautiful! you have a lovely voice and the tone is amazing! the where dragons sleep part kind of adds ...
Sat Nov 03, 2018 1:12 pm -
Re: Monster Wars : the changeling vs the witch
Sophie here to review your piece! ~ I quite enjoyed reading this! at first I was a bit confused but after a while, I understand how amazing and interest it ...
Sat Nov 03, 2018 12:10 pm
