hey there
i was searching in your works and this was what i found catchy, because i just love football
i first i thought you're talking about the american football since they call this soccer, but i was happy to realise it's about FOOTBALL
anyways i think that your poem is really well written, it rhymes and flows just nicely
i totally loved the first two lines, such a nice opening
i think you've captured the feeling of loving this game quite well with these lines:
It's a football night,
Imagine why it's so bright.
in this part i loved how you showed that it's a passion of lots of people around the world and how unites them tegether no matter where they are from
though i enjoyed it a lot but in my opinion it needs some metaphors just to apear a little more" poetry" it just my opinion though
overall, your piece is soo unique and lovely and i enjoyed it so much
have a great day
-SMILE-
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