I really like the flow of these lyrics! They rhyme well, and I can clearly picture what the song depicts.
A/N: listen to a recording of the song here
Here in the deep
Where dragons sleep
Something is
Stirring
Come face your fears
Frozen in tears
Hard hearts are
Turning
Look at the rage
Silently caged
Everyone’s
Yearning
What’s just in your eyes?
Light up the skies
Everyone’s
Burning
Can you see the truth
Deep within you?
Something’s
Discerning
You know what is wrong
You know what is right
What fate are you
Earning?
See the fire’s consumed
All the life around you
What things are
Learning?
Did it die as you thought?
Look what grief you have wrought
No life is
Returning
Everything's burning
Because of you, everything's burning
Because of you, everything's burning
Because of you, everything's burning
Because of you, because of you
I really like the flow of these lyrics! They rhyme well, and I can clearly picture what the song depicts.
Sophie here to review!
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the beginning is super mysterious and beautiful! you have a lovely voice and the tone is amazing! the where dragons sleep part kind of adds a hint of excitement to it like a small weakness. I loooooooooove the lyrics choice. it Is so beautiful and fits in a mysterious tone and I love it.
good job and write on
WOAHHHHH!! Your music is better than Billie Eleish or whatever her name is. I love this and the effects and strumming and YOUR HEAVENLY voice is so perfect. PLEASE CONTINUE
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(Also, unfortunately, the link to your song didn't work . I'm sure you sang it fantastically, though!)
Here in the deep
Where dragons sleep
Something is
Stirring
Come face your fears
Frozen in tears
Look at the rage
Silently caged
Everyone’s
Yearning
What’s just in your eyes?
Light up the skies
Everyone’s
Burning
Can you see the truth
Deep within you?
Something’s
Discerning
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