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I really live the repetition of the chorus. Its really beautiful, as is the sentiment of the poem. I can really feel your love and it is touching. However, you ...

Overall, this is great. You really get the emotion across. I especially love how you never straight out said how you feel - you just said what was happening. This ...

Great poem! I love the imagery. However, you could make this even stronger. The great thing about poetry is that, unlike prose, it is not filtered first through the brain- ...

Great job! I love the repetition. It really adds to the creepiness and suspense. The great thin about poetry is that it is direct and compact. Its like a brick ...

I love the lyrical quality of your piece. I also love the reveal at the end of the poem. The poem is light and funny the rhyming is great too. ...

This is amazing! Great. The feelings are really present and the reader can hear your emotions through the poem. However, I think that you could expand this even more and ...

Your description was right! It's amazing! I love it! I especially like the last part where you wrote: But you haven't seen The scars on my heart Because things like ...

Wow. That was amazing. I think that the awesomeness of a writing can be determined by how long the reader has to wait after he/she has finished reading it and ...

Wow! I really like it! There's a very strong message there that I think we can all connect to. Everyone has been the victim of a stereotype. My favorite part ...

It's a great poem. I really like it. I don't know if you meant it to be a prose poem, but there is no punctuation. Also, the words should not ...

Great poem. I love it. I especially love these parts: The smell of his cologne was like crackling firewood. His hair was long and swishy and the colour of warm ...

Great poem. There were some grammatical errors: That I'M drifting away I HAVEN'T been human for 200 years I think you meant to say "I just go through the motions ...

I love this. It really made me think. I think that one of the signs of great writing is when it makes you think. At the end of the best ...

I love it. However, there are some typos: and you TRACED these translucent tracks trailing You picked up a white feather OFF the ground Also the M in Messiah in ...

When I first saw the title I thought it was going to be about a teenager and some older woman. I definitely thought it was going to be voluntary - ...