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Wow. I really liked this, sounds interesting. It has a good gripper and if it were a complete novel I would want to read it. It's really good for your ...

Okay. I myself found this poem interesting had it told a interesting story. I was not bothered at all by the "Little Girl" repetition, for, to me, it was just ...

Oh my, this poem almost made me cry. (that rhymes...) But really, this is such a nice poem, and I like how it is different and does not get stuck ...

Okay. I like that you tried to do an acrostic, as many people have issues with those. I for one love to do them. I see that you were describing ...

I like this one. It is short and sweet and it flows (double points for that one ), which many people have trouble with when dealing with acrostics. I also ...

This is such an adorable poem! I like the repetition of "silly me" in each stanza. At first I thought it would rhyme, but it didn't, which threw me off ...

Ha ha! I love the ending! It quickly turned the poem from interrogative to comical. This saying has been used a lot and can get boring, so i like that ...

I, for one, love this poem. This is the first poem that talks about real issues with such bluntness and no sugar-coating that I have ever read, and it is ...

Wow, this is good. It has so much feeling in it, and the diction is great! I like the imagery too. Also, I like how the stanzas flow, and the ...

I absolutely love this poem. It feels so nice to see a genuine Christmas spirit. It's good that some people have kept the "Christ" in Christmas. The poem has great ...

Well, this is a nice refresher form the gloomy and Gothic-Twilight themed poems that are getting all too abundant in appearance. I like how it is short but sweet, has ...

Great poem. I like the subject, and the end of the world seems to be something that has become a popular topic of discussions. I think your poem is more ...

This is a really good poem! It flows nicely, and the diction is great. I am a huge fan of vivid imagery, because I am a visual person, and this ...

Okay. It's a pretty good poem. I got a little lost in the middle when the rhyming stopped, and the lack of pauses. I tell him I want to die ...

Oh, my, this is wonderful! Very vivid imagery and great diction, and it actually sounds like somebody is talking to God. I’ll be your faithful slave forever, Until I fall ...