LOVE

by Rayneisthename

Published February 9, 2011

In Poetry

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I just kinda wanted to people to read this..... I just came up with this in English class today and i thought it was pretty good(and cute!) for coming up with it in 3 minutes, it's a new record!!! It's an acrosstic poem that spells love! I hope you like it. ;)
-plus i haven't posted anything in like 5 million years...

Letting yourself fall head
Over heels for a
Very special boy who means
Everything to you

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bellajackson
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bellajackson commented Comment · Feb 10, 2011

It is very cute! Sounds like something I would do....ahh, young love! A great source of inspiration for us writers! <3 I'm sure that "very special boy" would love ur poem.

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322sivart wrote a review Review · Feb 10, 2011

I think everything that was to be said about this poem was said by shiney1. Excellent work! I haven't reviewed any other work you may have posted here because I am a new member, but I can tell just by this how great of a poet you are.
Keep writing!
-Alex

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shiney1 wrote a review Review · Feb 9, 2011

I like this one.
It is short and sweet and it flows (double points for that one ), which many people have trouble with when dealing with acrostics.
I also like how the sentence is not too long, but gives enough info.
I do acrostics too, if you want to take a look at them :).

Very nice!



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