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Re: 40 Meters Ahead
Hey there! Shey here for a review! I see this was an experiment with white space, from the jam last night. I'm by no means on expert on white space, ...
Jul 1, 2017 -
Re: Pan Gourd, Sun Kind, art Sand Meek (June 11th)
Hey there! Shey here for a good 'ol review! I wanna start this off by saying I really enjoyed this poem. As always, I might be a little harsh with ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Beauty
Hey there! Shey here for a review! I'll start this off by saying that I enjoyed this poem because of its message and way of delivering it. You stated said ...
Jun 14, 2017 -
Re: Papyrus's Spaghetti (An Undertale Parody)
Hey Kara! Shey here for a review! (Good Lord I haven't reviewed in forever, and you asking is gonna get me back into it, a long needed motivation. Thanks ;) ...
Jun 12, 2017 -
Re: over-exposed moments , smeared captions
Hey there, Hannah! Shey here for a review! I'm starting this off by saying how much I loved the description in this piece. It was really easy for me to ...
May 7, 2017 -
Re: Leash-on-pets---
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Oki-doki! Let's hop into this thing! So, you've got a near poem here! I liked it a lot! It sounded very mature, and ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 82
Hey there, Lumiface! (I kinda have an obsession with that name, I confess) Okay, let's take a whack at these three things you wanted reviewers to cover at the bottom. ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: dances in the dark
Hey there! Shey here for a review! I read poetry a lot, and so this is a familiar topic. But, the second person perspective was totally surprising and really unique. ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: In the Wind
Hey there! Shey here for a review! You really have a knack for poetry, especially the rhythm. The rhythm was extremely well thought out, and I don't think I've read ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: "Seduction"
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Okay, so this was an odd story. At first I couldn't see where it was going, or why you were even writing this. ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: She deserves better
Hey there! Shey here for a review! This is a really good poem because I feel it. Every emotion the narrator describes is in me. That takes a high level ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: oops
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Alllllrighty. So, you have a cute little poem here. I like it. But it's only six lines, total of eight words. In cases ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Fallen
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Let's jump into this thing! Overall, I honestly loved this thing. It had an amazing rhythm and rhyme scheme, the latter of which ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: hacker, dearest
Hey there, Regi! Shey here for a review! As Hannah covered below, this was a really neat, unique idea for a poem. Its nice to see poems not about romance, ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 49
Hey there! Shey here for a review! (Last piece in the green room!) Overall, you've got a near story here. I'd like to comment on all that I liked about ...
Apr 30, 2017
