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  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: A love story I'd like to cite.

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! I will be totally honest... I have no idea what this was about. I've never even been to a wedding, let alone understand ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Little Birdie

    Hello! Shey here for a review! I want to start by saying this was a really amazing poem. As a result of its amazingness, I haven't got much to complain ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! This was a cool poem, and there are a couple things I wanna point out. First, you really can rhyme. Sometimes, when poets ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Silence Remains

    Hey there! Shey here for a stupidly short review in doing late at night! I'm really just gonna point out your skill at creating a narrator with a realistic voice. ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Cycle

    Hey there! Shey here for a quick review! You have a nice poem here, and I've got a question and a couple of suggestions for it. First, the question. What ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Control

    Hey there! Shey here for a short review! Overall, you have a neat poem. However, I'm here for the story. The formatting of this poem took away from the story ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Shirin says to Khosrow

    Hey there! An uneducated Shey here for a review! By uneducated I mean I have no idea what the context of this poem was. HOWEVER, that does not stop me ...

    Apr 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Gamer Poem

    This is great, but one quick comment. I know this is modelled after Roses are Red, but there is one difference that for some reason I can't shake. Roses are ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Innocence

    Sheyren's Review ~of Innocence~ Hey there! Shey here for a review! Firstly, I see you're new here, and thus I formally welcome you! I also noticed that this is your ...

    Mar 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The girl I am attracted to likes Harry Potter and piano music therefore I also like Harry Potter and piano music

    Sheyren's Review ~of The girl I am attracted to likes Harry Potter and piano music therefore I also like Harry Potter and piano music~ Hey there! \(^。^ ) Shey here ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Script » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Gardens of Eden

    Sheyren's Review ~of Garden of Eden~ Hey there! \(^。^ ) Shey here to review! First off, I'd like to commend you for trying something new! Its always difficult when starting ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dead Girl's Kiss

    Sheyren's Review ~of Dead Girl's Kiss~ Hey there, Aleta! \(^。^ ) Shey here for a review! I loved this poem. It was haunting in a beautiful way. I rarely read ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Girl Game

    Sheyren's Review ~~ Hey there! \(^。^ ) Shey here for a review! I'm going to start this review off by saying I am a guy. Hence, I can't comment much ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Handfuls of sand

    Sheyren's Review ~~ Hey there! \(^。^ ) Shey here for a review! Overall, this was a beautifully written poem, and I am honestly impressed with it. The narrator felt understandable, ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Curiosity/1945

    Sheyren's Review ~~ Hey there! \(^。^ ) Shey here to review! Overall, this was a nice poem about (what I presumed to be) the dropping of the atomic bomb in ...

    Mar 26, 2017


I like to create sympathy for my characters, then set the monsters loose.
— Stephen King