sarahnsnow

This was so awesome!! I believe every word, that Jesus was the only one that could die for us and that he is the only way. Everything flows very smoothly ...

Wow, this is a very heart wrenching poem. It is really good! You put a lot of emotion in it that made me even feel the girl's emotions. You did ...

Hm, i really like this poem! It all flows together very well and you have some very good word choice that makes it all even better. I liked how you ...

Hey I really like your poem!! I agree with everything your poem says; how life after death will be like a resting haven . You had very good imagery and ...

Hm, interesting poem and idea. I'm not sure if there's is deep meaning, or what it is but I can infer that maybe it's saying you're trying to be yourself ...

Cool I really like this poem!! I see no errors in the poem so that's great!! I love how you wrote about Writer's Block. I get it ALOT so what ...

Sweet, I really like this poem!! It describes exactly how I feel... That yearning to be free but you feel like you're stuck where you are and you feel like ...

Hmm, Well first review!!! yay!! Hm I liked this poem... there is no grammar errors such as spelling mistakes and stuff like that so I think it is pretty good!!! ...

This poem is pretty great!! There's nothing wrong about it, no errors or anything like that so it is pretty perfect!! I liked your idea in this poem. I liked ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. You did an excellent job with writing this. I know someone exactly like this who has gotten a broken heart multiple times. It's quite ...

I liked it! When i read it, it reminded me of something fantasy. Like what others said, it seems to lack some emotion and you could have added some more ...

Wow, this is really good!! There is a a lot of emotions in this. It's sad. sorrowful and you did a good job presenting that in this poem. You had ...

Hey I really like this this poem!! It was really well written and from the heart. I can relate to this so much. You had good ideas and good fluency ...

Wow this was a very good poem! I love the word choice you put it in for example; "My brother laid there, his amber eyes hidden beneath heavy, dark eyelids. ...

Wow I really liked this!! Everything ran together smoothly and you had marvelous word choice! It was just wonderful!! I liked how you put this. "I am more than an ...