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(sorry the first one submitted itself before i was done :P) hi there mindblown (awesome name btw!! :D) Roxy here to review! :) This is such a sweet poem! A ...

hi there mindblown (awesome name btw!! :D) Roxy here to review! :) This is such a sweet poem! A very innocent type of love, just lovely! But I do think ...

Hi there! :) Roxy here as requested! :) This is definatly an interesting consept for a poem! havent seen many like it! :) There are a few things though! "Does ...

Hi there, Roxy here :) Ok, first off, always start off with a capital letter! The first few sentences don't do this and it looks quite sloppy. Secondly, grammer and ...

Hi there, Roxy here! This is certainly an interesting piece! I like the definate title, that time is running out and there is no other options about it! I like ...

Hi WhitePencil! Roxy here! :) This. Is. A. Fantastic. Piece! I just had to get that out there! :D I loved the repition, and the way you started the piece ...

Hi there, Roxy here! :) It has potentail, but it was a but of an anticlimax to be honest, I was expecting you to tell me about the thrill of ...

hi there Jordin, Roxy here! :) now, this could be an..interesting review, because, I'm from Ireland, live in Ireland and have studied Irish history for the last year or so... ...

Hi there GrapeNerd, Roxy here! :) Im glad that you decided to put this in the poetry section by the way, it makes a nice short poem! However, I do ...

Hi, Roxy here! :) I think that this is a lovely, personal and emotional poem! I do however, as others have pointed out, think that it would benefit greatly from ...

Hi there aouther2b, Roxy here to review! :) It is a very touching poem, you can feel the emotion oozing out of everyword, which is ideal! I like how you ...

Hi there Catnip, Roxy back as requested!! :D the poems lay out looks soo much better!! but the next step is to try and get rid of those black lines ...

Hi there, roxy here! :) On first glance, I think that the idea of th piece looks intriguing, but I think that you will really need to fix the lay-out ...

Hi there, Roxy here! :) First off, I cant really tell if I like the form of this poem or not, part of me likes it and finds it alluring ...

Hi there, Roxy here! :) This is a beautiful piece, I love the intertwining of the emotional and personal throughtout this piece, its very well done! Its such a sad ...