Very nice poem. I clicked on it because the title really ebbed at my curiosity. Anyways, for the most part, I liked it. I liked the emotion you put into it as well as the personal feel it has to it. I felt like you were actually reading it to me. However, I think you seem to shift a lot from 'her' and 'me' perspective and that can be a bit confusing for the reader. But other than that, I thought it was really well done. Nice work. -IceWinifredd
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