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Re: It is the Nature of the Universe
Hi! Rida here with a review! First impression: W O W. I really like it! The way you mould a conversation between a cloud and a sky. Glows I really ...
Feb 16, 2021 -
Re: The clouds that were grey....
Hi! Rida here for a review! First impressions: W O W. This was a wonderful poem and I just loved it! Glows: This was a very, very, very, very, very ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: You Should Never Wish Away a Day
Hey! Rida for a review! :) :) :) First impression: aww, such a cute poem! Glows This poem was small, but told us about a topic that was big. Your ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: Drowned
Hey! Rida here for a review! First impressions: this was.... a pretty dark poem. A bit sad. But, it’s good like that. Glows: This poem was creating a feeling of ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: The Shadow Of Respect
This is an amazing, wonderful, beautiful and heart wrenching poem. The formatting adds to the sudden punch you feel in your heart when you read it and I think this ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: To A Boy I Saw in the Supermarket Once
Hey! Rida here for a review! So, I loved the poem, it was filled with imagery and it made the poem more beautiful. I think you could improve the last ...
Jan 24, 2021 -
Re: In remembrance of @silvermoon17 💜
I’m so sorry to hear about your friend. I haven’t really had any friends who have.... gone. But I had to move every one or two years and had to ...
Jan 8, 2021 -
Re: An Unlit Sky and Inky Sea
Wow! You are a very, very talented poet! This poem was relatable and really good. I like how you repeated the sentence ‘the unlit sky and inky sea.’ I think ...
Jan 2, 2021 -
Re: Winter Spell
Wow! I think this is an amazing poem! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing! I think the whole poem is just PERFECT! It’s short and really sweet. “Sighing, the ...
Dec 22, 2020 -
Re: INTP, Logician
Hi! Nice poem! It rhymes really well. Just the first three lines were not that smooth. And...... I found one grammatical mistake, but other then that there is really nothing ...
Dec 10, 2020 -
Re: Eureka Fillips (Chapter 1)
I see you published it! Well, this is absolutely amazing chapter! And........... sorry, I’m not really good with reviewing...... but many other more talented reviewers will come and review this ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: My Dear Enemy
This is a very good poem! A very funny one, I mean. The rhyming you used was very good, and you are very talented poet. I loved how used a ...
Oct 29, 2020 -
Re: .
This was a wonderful poem! It really gives a bit of hope. My favourite line was this: When the world is on fire and, Yeah, it was a really good ...
Oct 19, 2020 -
Re: The Insignificant
Wow! I think this is an AMAZING poem! Good job! It explains wonderfully the effects of pollution. And I like how you wrote this poem starting with ‘O.....’ . This ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Scribbles 2
Wow, I liked this poem a lot! This is the most confusing poem in the history of confusing poems! (Meaning it doesn’t make sense at all, which the title explains.) ...
Oct 15, 2020
