Young Writers Society

Hello,

I really enjoyed this poem, even though it is the most confusing, confounding, bewildering poem I have ever read. In a good way.

My favorite part was the ending where it says. I really like the repetition of it, how you keep repeating the word ink.
"Ink on a paper
Ink on the snow
Ink in the sky
God is a pen.

I also really liked this part too.
"Blades of light
Enter the sleeping chamber.
The darkness is bleeding
Snors and growls."


I loved all the imagery you used to convey your poem, it made it very deep. I always try to use imagery when I'm writing, but sometimes it doesn't always work for me. It was a great poem even if they were just "Scribbles."

Can't wait to read what you write next.

Carpe diem,
LUNARGIRL

Wow, I liked this poem a lot! This is the most confusing poem in the history of confusing poems! (Meaning it doesn’t make sense at all, which the title explains.) But what I truly like, is the imagery, I always try to use good imagery but I’m never able to do it. You are a wonderful poet! And a talented one too! Hope to see more interesting Scribbles, and keep writing!

Wow, I liked this poem a lot! This is the most confusing poem in the history of confusing poems! (Meaning it doesn’t make sense at all, which the title explains.) But what I truly like, is the imagery, I always try to use good imagery but I’m never able to do it. You are a wonderful poet! And a talented one too! Hope to see more interesting Scribbles, and keep writing!

HI!
I love your poem. honestly when i read the name "scribbles" i thought it would be bad.
BUT the way you use the words in this make it so that a whole lot of emotions pile right under the surface of this it sparks more interest then any other poem i've read since i started this.
The way you describe it makes it better and shows a side to words most people don't notice.

Momo's here!

I really like this poem a lot! You are such a good poet, and I love seeing your poetry around the site. That being said, let's look at something I wanted to point out.

The darkness is bleeding
Snors and growls.