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Hahahaa, this is pretty hilarious. The last lines were really good. It was nice when you shortened the lines as the lab partner walked out. I assumed this was going ...

well, this isn't really a review, but I don't know if they could be called episodes. They're a bit short. I would always double and triple check the little things. ...

Hi! I don't know if I'm going to say what hasn't already been said, but I'm gonna give this a go anyways. First off, I really like the idea. Although ...

Well, I must say, I have no idea what's going on. I don't really think this could be classified as a narrative, as it follows no human form of chronology ...

Well, I have to tell you, I'm a big fan of Eragon. You should probably classify that in the beginning so it doesn't look like plagiarism :). So, starting off. ...

Hi, happy review day, It was a pretty nice bit, though I don't get the context, or even the character. Is he a dragon or a person? It starts out ...

Wow, this was a really nice piece all around. My favorite part was the line about sweat-spangle fingers. You might want to pay attention to some punctuation and capitalization, as ...

Wow, a really descriptive and imaginitive piece all around. I like how you described silence using other sounds. That was an elegant touch. A few minor grammatical errors were there, ...

I really thought this was a good poem, and really captured a tender feeling. It was cool how you started everything with "My Angel so beautiful," and even capitalized "Angel." ...

Hi! First off, I was impressed by your personal spin on the dystopian genre. It's really hard to find an original idea in the flutter of ink that followed "The ...

Wow, a really good poem all around. The last line, I think, was your strongest, and I think it's always a good idea to end your work with a line ...

wow, I'm really amazed. that was really great. Your imagery was very good. I suppose there is a little bit of grammar and punctuation to nitpick at, but it seems ...

Nice job, a really good poem. I really enjoyed reading it, and your similes were nigh impeccable. If you tweaked the flow a little bit, nothing would be better. But ...

wow, a really nice piece. I have to admit that I didn't know where you were going for the first seven lines, but you really tied it together in the ...

Nice job, a very nice piece altogether. I really enjoy that you chose to portray this side of humanity. However, the title doesn't allude as much to this piece as ...