THE SILENCE

That was really beautiful and inspiring. This is the kind of work that makes me want to do something as touching.
The raw emotion can be related to but it's also pretty unique. I love it!
I look forward to reading more from you!

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WOW, this poem made my heart break, its beautiful! I love how you described the silence using a color in the last para! The poem is very descriptive and the imagery is amazing!

Although I love this piece I must point out a few things I though could of been done differently. I'm sorry, please don't hate me.

There were a few instances where I fought to understand what you were trying to say, such as, "its beating to screaming" and "is coldness and blue." Maybe you could of said, "its beating to scream" and "is cold and blue."

Overall, this poem is a work of art, its amazing and I cant wait to read more from you!

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Wow, a really descriptive and imaginitive piece all around. I like how you described silence using other sounds. That was an elegant touch. A few minor grammatical errors were there, but I've never been one to nitpick . You did really well using vivid imagery to describe something so vague. I've always been kind of a sucker for poems describing a concept or somesuch. So, all in all, a very well-rounded piece.

I'll look forward to reading more of your stuff!

I really liked this poem. So well said. Though it has very few mistakes.

'Can't be broke by a sounds"

You could've said, 'Can't be broken by sounds' or 'Can't be broken by a sound.'

And,

'Its's beating for screaming.' This line is weird. You can say it as,'It's beating to scream.'
Other than that, the poem says every bit of emotion of being silent. I liked it thoroughly. Keep writing. Good luck.All the best.