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Hi Mongoose here to review!:P First off the poem itself has an incredible story to it, with simple narration you have expressed an enormous amount of emotion and that is ...

mongoose here to review! First of all this poem really speaks to me, each line is a perfect representation of how i feel sometimes and I think this was the ...

Hi Mongoose here to review I really like your words in this poem, I really do but where's the punctuation? I think even if you want it to be one ...

Hi Mongoose here to review, Wow, this is really powerful, I like how you used your rhyming only at the beginning and end of the poem it highlights he beginning ...

Hi Mongoose here. :O my face. I did not expect that... at all. This was brilliant, I hung on your every word, even if i had to look phantasmagorically up ...

Hi, mongoose here to review. First of I really like this, it explains my day. Bit weird really. I love this it is a great way to express one day ...

Hey mongoose here, Ive never read a poem like this before i must say. Its very to the point and sharp which is good in this intance as the meaning ...

Hey mongoose here, As always i love your work brolington! This is really deep, enotion is ladened throughout abd soread like butter, its brilliant. Although it is quite an upsetting ...

hey mongoose her Ive read it through, I like the concept you've got going. It s good that the characters have all been introduced well because it i the sort ...

Hey its mongoose here. This is such a deep short story, the depth of emotion is brilliant! Its really clever how it switche to watch another couple and to wish ...

Hey mongoose here, I really enjoyed this poem it shows how the world really is unfaur in such few lines. I love how it explains wealth and poverty against youth ...

Hey it's mongoose, This is so cool, it s too true, grades are all a fuss over nothing. People can leave school with nothing and get a low paid job, ...

Hey, Its mongoose! I'm determined to review every piece of your ongoing book, as soon as you post you've got to tell me!:P I think this was a wonderful start, ...

Hey Mongoose here Clarity, clarity, written again, aha. Love your style though, got to admit its is the best way to improve. I loved this, it was better than the ...

This is so short and snappy! I think its a brilliant way to write a poem, I love that its all one sentence because then the full stop at the ...