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"You'll be avenged, I know this much / What if I'm slain, I don't fear such" The best lines of this piece right here. Strong determination; doing everything possible (and ...

"And I never whisper mine." There couldn't have been a better ending to this one. The whole piece plays like a short movie and I'm sure that many people will ...

So motivational, yet so simple. I really enjoyed. Simple lines like "Let it be a light / to those who lost their way", "and when things would get hard, / ...

Ah, so personal. I like it! " You scoundrell, you witch, you lying little bitch. Curse your wicked bloodline you evil daughter of malign." This one was the best. Every ...

Channing Tatum? Oh, you're such a girl! hahah All grammar mistakes aside, I want to ask.. why? What made you write this? It seems like something jotted down in the ...

Hehee, cute one you got there, Gilberto! Obviously, it's not to be taken seriously. It's funny and childish, and I'd go as far as saying... it's love. The beginning of ...

Before I give you my two cents, I want to briefly address the other reviews you got. Somebody was talking about lack of story and the fact that you called ...

having already edited this piece, I must disagree with Aley - it's a scene, a brief glimpse into the mind of an artist. the climax lasts as long as he ...

this is so.. pure. it's love, childish love. so simple, yet managing to cover every little feeling that the young, freshly in love heart feels. it's artistic through its simplicity. ...

I like its symmetry. although it's the same thing that makes you practically read it twice without actually intending to do so. so by the time I finished reading it ...

original. creative. when you have so much raw emotion to express, you just can't follow the rules; it would defeat the whole purpose of it being raw. and I do ...

I like this one's simplicity; all I can hope for is that you will make this one a comedy. to me, everything points to comedy; from the silly title (come ...

I feel like this one is a story of some sort, but I didn't really get it. I'm thinking that the brackets are simply separating the two.. perspectives. maybe dream ...

I think it's good. yes, it's too short. yes, it's not an ocean of metaphors. but it's on point. the first two lines are so brilliant, that they could hold ...

I'm a bit undecided on this one. I like the first verse, the lines flow good, and together with the poetic language, it just.. feels right. somewhere after "by no ...