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Hi thewritersdream! Well, I have to say that I really liked this poem. Seriously. I never saw anything like this before. I don't have anything to say about the content; ...

Hi Kittypowpow23! (Cool username, by the way.) I liked this poem. I think about life that way too, and you did a great job in expressing that with words. But ...

Hi AlexSushiDog! This poem is great! I really like it. I like how you leave us to imagine how the world came to crumble down, like, anything could have happened ...

Hi FinnWinterfall! First of all... Hahahahaha!! :D This is so brilliantly written. If you didn't include the part where you let us know it is orange juice you're talking about, ...

Hi TranscendingIllusion! This poem was disturbing. In a GOOD way, not the bad way. But this poem created a very real imagery and made me gape while staring at the ...

Hello, lethallauren! First, I should say that I really enjoyed this poem. If I understood it correctly, it is about war and a person dying - and reflecting on the ...

Hello RachelLeeAnn! I really liked your poem. It's very sad and well-portrayed. Everything was perfect. You were my home. I LOVE this. Seriously, I love this. Home can be defined ...

Hello GreenTulip! This was a very interesting and well-written poem. Although, I think that it could have contained more rhymes? Ah, nevertheless, it was wonderfully written and I could totally ...

Hi gc0410! Well, seeing that you put this in the 'poetry' category, I think you should make this more.. poem like. As DukeofWonderland already said, putting paragraphs in poetry is ...

Hey Ossum :) I really like this. This is really cool. Falling down just seems to be my style, you know? The repeating, 'Is I', is mesmerizing and seems to ...

Hello Ossum! I really love this. Partly because I am really just into flying.. and this song is really awesome.. especially the repeating part. So fly, Until you touch the ...

Hello AnyimHumphrey :D I'll just admit it, I sang this song. The lyrics really begged me to sing it, because it was so good... Your lyrics are well-paced, you have ...

Hi 567ajt! Well, this song is really great and a lot of pieces drew me in, but I like this one the most ; Your startling excuses for escape: "I ...

Hi 567ajt! This intrigued me a lot. First, of course, there are two meanings in the term, 'gay', happy and bisexual. I'm guessing that in this song/lyrics, it should mean ...

Hi, w0nd3rstruck! I should say, this poem IS a little depressing. But it is intriguing, and I know for a fact that some people (in my case, some of my ...