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Hey RadiantShadow! I absolutely loved this! Your description is amazing, I feel as if I am there experiencing everything. Your writing is some of the best I have ever seen. ...

Oh my goodness. This was amazing! Each passage was long enough to get the feel of each stage of her life. It flowed wonderfully and I feel like I lived ...

Oh my god this reminds me of the flash! Have you ever seen that show? It is amazing. If you ever want to add more to this watching that show ...

Just curious what kind of poetry format is this? It is really cool! I love it! "Compassion, peace, tolerance, respect: for THEir people and by THEir people." The copy and ...

This story has a lot of potential. You have some small errors, like capitalization and some wording doesn't make sense. 'out of all punishments' Out should be captialized. 'I remember ...

Your story is absolutely intriguing. These are some of the things I noticed and they are also the best parts of the story. 'Hides whole body froze as her brain ...

I am not a big poetry person, like I mean I don't write it, but yours is good. I want no sure what it means when you do this '[please ...

I am kind of confused. I like the first part of it explaining that the plant life is slowly disappearing and it is being replaced by modern life. ''Patiently waiting ...

I am literally on the verge of crying. That was absolutely amazing. I love the description of the smile, and how you left it. I would maybe changed the ending ...

These would be wonderful like song lyrics or a rap or something. The way they flow together and create the image in your mind as you read is wonderful. "A ...

I am not really that into this kind of dark and creepy writing but it truly is magnificent. Reminds me of something with Goosebumps and a little Supernatural. Your work ...

You have probably heard the phrase, "cuts deep like a knife" well you just plunged a dagger in my heart and soul. That was beautiful, the perfect explanation of any ...

I literally don't know what I just read. This is so weird. Peter Pan has only a few stories. Either the boy of imagination or the boy who held kids ...

This is absolutely beautiful. Filled with wonder and confusion. I can sense it is about a relationship, although its a little hard to put the lyrics into music. But you ...

It's a good plot line but I am kind of confused on what exactly is going on. I understand that they are in an insane asylum but why exactly are ...