kitty4111

Hey Milla, I thought that this was fantastic! I love how it flowed and I loved the imagery! I also loved how you placed the words, like: "and forgot how ...

Hey lovely, I thought that this was really well done, and I really enjoyed it! It was very emotional, but I like that about it, it wasn't over dramatic. I ...

Hey isuki, I thought that this was very interesting. I really liked how it rhymed, but you didn't make it sound like Dr. Suess, that is hard to do sometimes, ...

Hey Strangelove! I thought this was really cute, it did make me laugh, which is good, and all of the stuff that you say, is totally true! I loved it! ...

Hey Spark, I thought that this was amazing! The imagery was just on point, and it was just so dramatic that I couldn't stop reading it. I have never really ...

Hey SnazzyPencil, I thought that this was really well done. I loved the way you wrote it, with just the right amount of pauses, and at the right times. I ...

Hey Delirium, I thought that this was really well written, and the descriptions were really great :D. The first stanza was really well written, but the flow of it was ...

Hey, I thought this was really good, it was super cute and I liked that about it! I love the summer part the best, it is really well written and ...

Hey SparkToFlame! I thought this was amazing! I liked how you made it sound as if someone was just talking, it didn't exactly sound like a poem, (but don't take ...

Hey anonymousx! I really liked this poem, I thought you did a great job. I loved the wording and how it flowed really nicely. I also liked how you arranged ...

Hey, I thought this was a very interesting, and true poem. I liked how you were kind of listing things, but you made it into something else. That's really cool! ...

Hey, I loved this, it really described the Silence well (I am a Whovian by the way :D ). I loved how you added the "Why do you have lines ...

Hey, I really loved this, you really captured the moon well! You are a great poet! I wanted to say that I liked how you described the moon as if ...

Hey, I really enjoyed the prologue! I also noticed that you have a chapter one, I'll check that out! I loved how you described the girls eyes: "gave birth to ...

I loved your story! It kind of reminded me of Mulan in the beginning (you know disguising herself as a boy to become a soldier). But I thought that your ...