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Re: Darcy
Hello Harry here for a review Lets start with the good things, this is on point and leaves you crying afterwards. Death happens to life everyday and people take it ...
Apr 26, 2017 -
Re: Mom Got Her Wings
Hey Harry here for a review, lets start off with I am sorry for your loss and I hope you recover soon. Next I loved this poem and it made ...
Nov 7, 2016 -
Re: The Flower to Our Love
Good work lets review section by section. Years ago when I first met you, my heart was only a bud; not yet opened and shown, and needing some love to ...
Oct 6, 2016 -
Re: Purity of Nature
I like this poem it shows your feelings for the nature and that is hard. I do not see any grammar problems at all. I would use less commas though, ...
Oct 6, 2016 -
Re: When I Realize
Hay Harry here for a review. I always start with what you could work on first so here we go, don't take it the wrong way if you think I ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Playing with faults
Hello Harry here for a review. First lets get to the bad part of this poem, don't take it the wrong way if you think I am being rude. First ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Princess on the Clock
Hi Harry here for a review. Lets start with what you need to work on, first off there are some places where you rhyme and others that you don't. I ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: Sweet Poison
Hay Harry here for a review. So I usually go right into the bad but I loved this poem so much I resided to jump right into the good. First ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: A heavy memory.
Hey Harry here for a review. OK lets get down to it, lets start with the bad. You don't have to worry because there are not very many of them. ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Finally
Hay Harry here for a review. First off lets get to the bad stuff, I am not criticizing you and you don't have to follow my advice. First off, what ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: The End
Hay Harry576 here for a review: I really felt a feeling in this poem and it made my heart feel like what I feel almost everyday, I will git to ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Anime
Hello Harry here for a review: Lets go part by part and don't take it the wrong way if I sound rude. Just trying to help. (Imagine if you had ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: breaking apart
Hi Harry here for a review: Let's start off with the good things first so you don't get upset. First off loved the title and the beginning, made me want ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: I want to love what I write.
Hay Harry here for a review: OK first off I loved your poem and can't wait to read more. Now time for the good things about this poem. First I ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: The After Story
Hi Harry here for a review: So first off I loved how you started off with the poem, it gets the reader right into it and you also add feeling ...
Feb 29, 2016