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Re: If only you were here (Edited)
Hey there! FIRST OF ALL never ever ever diss your own work. After all, they say one man's trash is another man's treasure. I find this to ring true particularly ...
Nov 5, 2017 -
Re: Untitled
Hey there! Ghostie here to review this wonderful piece of art THIRTEEN YEARS after its creation! I'm going to pick apart your poem line by line, but judging by what ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Knife
Hey, hey! Ghostie here to review this lovely piece of art. First off, from an author to and author. WOW. This is great. Short and to the point. Hah. Get ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: The Moon
Hello! Ghostie here with the shortest review on Earth. I am very confused about this poem. What exactly does any of this mean? i don't wanna take it for face ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: imagination
Wow, okay, I'm not going to introduce myself like everyone else does cause you can just read my username ;) (By the way, nothing I say is ever meant to ...
Jan 26, 2017 -
Re: What I Say
Okay. Let's get this show on the road, shall we? I hope you don't mind criticism, it isn't meant to offend, it's meant to be constructive. Here we go! To ...
Jan 25, 2017 -
Re: Nighttime
This will be very short for one of my reviews because it's touchy for me, okay? Let's begin! First off, this is amazing! I loved the flow of it, but ...
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: Joyride
Okay, first off, I dunno if I'm allowed to curse, but HOLY SHIT! This is probably the best poem I've read on here, I mean, there are flaws here and ...
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: That Night
Ignore him. Yes, it does have errors here an there, but poems aren't about structure or grammar. They're about feeling. Emotion. Your poem, the message in it, is very breathtaking. ...
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: Screaming
Hey, so yeah, this is really great and I love it. As a kid with divorced parents, I know how this can get. I'm gonna go line by line here, ...
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: i die on paper
This may be short, but it's definitely meaningful. I would recommend, though, expanding this into a longer poem. I know that it may take away meaning, but I don't think ...
Dec 16, 2016 -
Re: Drawing With Silver
This..Was amazing, but i do have a few questions. For starters, why did you write this? Is It about you or someone else? Also, at the end.."I am the boy ...
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: Pretzel Bun
I love this. I love everything about it so this won't be much of a review. This was probably the funniest thing I've read in a long time. It's like ...
Nov 10, 2016 -
Re: Can't keep holding on.
Hun, listen, some things in life aren't meant to be understood. Sometimes, though, you can work past misunderstandings and pain to drive yourself to new perspectives. It's a sad, but ...
Nov 5, 2016 -
Re: A Former Lover
That was a beautiful poem, in my opinion. It has a meaning that stays clear throughout the entire thing. I too have experienced a lost love returned. Confused sparks struck ...
Nov 4, 2016
