User avatar

ghost223

Ghostie

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: If only you were here (Edited)

    Hey there! FIRST OF ALL never ever ever diss your own work. After all, they say one man's trash is another man's treasure. I find this to ring true particularly ...

    Nov 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Untitled

    Hey there! Ghostie here to review this wonderful piece of art THIRTEEN YEARS after its creation! I'm going to pick apart your poem line by line, but judging by what ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Knife

    Hey, hey! Ghostie here to review this lovely piece of art. First off, from an author to and author. WOW. This is great. Short and to the point. Hah. Get ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Moon

    Hello! Ghostie here with the shortest review on Earth. I am very confused about this poem. What exactly does any of this mean? i don't wanna take it for face ...

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: imagination

    Wow, okay, I'm not going to introduce myself like everyone else does cause you can just read my username ;) (By the way, nothing I say is ever meant to ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What I Say

    Okay. Let's get this show on the road, shall we? I hope you don't mind criticism, it isn't meant to offend, it's meant to be constructive. Here we go! To ...

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: Nighttime

    This will be very short for one of my reviews because it's touchy for me, okay? Let's begin! First off, this is amazing! I loved the flow of it, but ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Joyride

    Okay, first off, I dunno if I'm allowed to curse, but HOLY SHIT! This is probably the best poem I've read on here, I mean, there are flaws here and ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: That Night

    Ignore him. Yes, it does have errors here an there, but poems aren't about structure or grammar. They're about feeling. Emotion. Your poem, the message in it, is very breathtaking. ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Screaming

    Hey, so yeah, this is really great and I love it. As a kid with divorced parents, I know how this can get. I'm gonna go line by line here, ...

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: i die on paper

    This may be short, but it's definitely meaningful. I would recommend, though, expanding this into a longer poem. I know that it may take away meaning, but I don't think ...

    Dec 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Drawing With Silver

    This..Was amazing, but i do have a few questions. For starters, why did you write this? Is It about you or someone else? Also, at the end.."I am the boy ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Pretzel Bun

    I love this. I love everything about it so this won't be much of a review. This was probably the funniest thing I've read in a long time. It's like ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Can't keep holding on.

    Hun, listen, some things in life aren't meant to be understood. Sometimes, though, you can work past misunderstandings and pain to drive yourself to new perspectives. It's a sad, but ...

    Nov 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Former Lover

    That was a beautiful poem, in my opinion. It has a meaning that stays clear throughout the entire thing. I too have experienced a lost love returned. Confused sparks struck ...

    Nov 4, 2016


I don't do time.
— Liberty