gammagamerale

we all have heard a poem maybe once in our life about the this is not new but i like what you did with it. it is good and has ...

ok you got the rhyming down hear and i really like sorta did confuse me when you put play in there it was sorta of a rusty transition. i think ...

hey this is the gammagamerale as you see in my name but call me reborn if u need for it the real name for me. i came to give a ...

ok for one thing this is too long what i think you should do is split it I have spent a lot of time desperately searching for anything that Would ...

ok this send a clear message and i love how at the end where u put Now you, my friend Stand and wonder.bring the reader to continue this at the ...

i like it and i see nothing wrong in grammar so i will not be reviewing this but i am not one to review grammar explains your feelings loud and ...

hmm this is interesting and i really like what u did with it.the description is on piont and is somewhat confuse me thou a little i dont know why.i think ...

ok to be honest it doesnt seem much like a poem it just plane telling you what happening and there no uhh rythme to it and no description well there ...

ok it somewhat good but to be honest it jusst confused me off in a lot of places.I understand it talking about leaving the desert alone in the desert to ...

hmmmmmmmmmm ok time to put on my reviewing cap*puts it on* that better now i love this poem mainly because yes it speaks the truth of what everyone felt many ...

it is good and i like the description you add and the words you used in here. you should maybe take away a word "and blows away all my fight" ...

well since you came and took a visit to one of my poems i will vist yours too lol. ok time for the reviewing it is very blunt and yes ...

ok first it is good and i like it but if u don't mind i like to add a little revision of my own and sorta play with the style ...

hmmmmmmmmm *start nibbling on a pencil* it is good and i like it as u kept he whole theme which is mom i am bored well i can see that ...

we have all felt this heartbreak at one point or another most poet will write something like this. you use great word choice and i like how u defined the ...