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I love the flow of this poem and I have no issues with it. I like how short it is, it just reflects well how poems do not have to ...

I loved your story it had a lot of intrigue and it was very fast paced. I will try to help you out my friend. First of all that was ...

Wow that is a very chilling poem i have to say. You did a wonderful job it is a very nice read unless of course you are by yourself then ...

I loved your poem and I feel it does convey the emotion of dread very properly as a whole. All of the words seem to be being used properly in ...

A true friend will tell you when you have made a bad poem, so true friend if I do let me know okay? You did great. I love your poem ...

Reviewing, I like your poem, I see strong potential in you. Feel free to respond, effectively or not at all to my (constructive) criticism in the line: 'Loud it greats' ...

That poem is a deep one, and if it truly happened to you I will give you my whole-hearted sincere sympathy, to have a loved one yanked away from you ...

I feel that all reviewers don't need to be critics. So, instead of redundantly pointing out small flaws in your poem that were already stated, I shall do something else. ...

I love this poem. This poem is big for me, it hits you in big ways. It hits you in the heart and that is what you need in a ...

That was amazing. Okay for starters you have that rhyming so well it could be a scary little lullaby. The words flow so smoothly that it is just amazing. I ...

This is such a great poem. It is so relatable that I just. It expresses everything people feel when they start to say something and are drowned out by others. ...

This poem is very good but some lines confuse me. I would love for you to elaborate and then maybe change word choice but you don't have to because it ...

WoW! Just wow that rhyme scheme is ingenious it rhymed every time! Poems don't have to rhyme don't get me wrong. I love some that don't but that was amazing ...

I shall review ye now. Just for one that is wow. WoW. WOW. That is very saddening but realistic as well and I like that. Now I will go to ...

OH MY GOD, that was BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!! Loki is litterally crying right now...... *sobs fade Loki glares * "Let me feel my emotions in peace. Do you know how hard ...