A friend of your's asked me to stop by this poem, and I'm glad I did! Excellent usage of sound devices here GreyMatter - and it doesn't make the piece sound forced, but has a nice rhythm. I liked how you bookended the poem by starting ending with the struggle of light/dark -> which has a lot of rich metaphorical interpretations from literal night/day, death/life, enlightenment, depression, glory etc. Nicely written!
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