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Re: We
fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job on the poem. Write more, please. Let's talk real. I enjoyed the poem. It was well-written, not to mention smooth. I like the concept ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Burnout
Fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice poem you got there. You're i's should really be capitalized. It is so important. But other than that, you did a good job. Everything seemed ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Missing Summer
fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job on your poem. I really liked it. The rhythm, beat, and words were fantastic! I like the concept of the story. It is so ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: We do not ride. We dance.
Fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job on the story. It was well-written."We do not ride. We dance". It has a nice ring to it. Good job on the title. I ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: The Old Jacket
Fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like your poem very much. The rhythm was good. I could not find any mistakes to the poem. I like your idea. The rhyming was ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Sherlock Holmes: Balance of Improbabilities, Part 1
Fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like your story, though it was a bit strange. I watched the TV series and loved it. So having Joanna Watson instead of John Watson ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: the symphony of the drum
Fantasydragon01 here! I like it very much. And it was very well-written and I hope you make more of these!!! I like the concept of the story. The beatings of ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Because I never learned the names of trees
Fantasydragon01 here for review time! I like your idea. The whole thing about trees and autumn, that is very creative. I like the season very much. I liked the Latin ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Marionette
Hey, fantasydragon01, the DIE-HARD fantasy lover is going to make another review. I love poetry, especially if they are fantasy. So, let me review on "Marionette". I like the rhythm. ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Reflection in the Water
Salutations! fantasydragon01, the DIE-HARD fantasy lover is here. I will make another review. Here we go: Okay, I love the titles. It sounds very poetic and captivating. I like the ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: For life or for death
Salutations! Fantasydragon01, the DIE-HARD fantasy lover, is here. I am ready to do another review. Here we go: Okay, I like the story about life and death. I think that ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: I Have Loved
Salutations! It is I, fantasydragon01, the DIE-HARD fantasy lover.I will begin my review. Here we go: Okay, I like the idea of the story. It does not necessarily mean finding ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: I Believe
Hey, it is me, fantasydragon01, the DIE-HARD fantasy lover. I am here to do some reviewing. Let us commence: Okay, the lines were good. I sang the song to myself ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: She Never Smiled Again
Hey, Bambi. It's me, fantasydragon01, the DIE-HARD fantasy lover!!!!!!!!! I will make a review on your poem. The topic is very creative, I must say. She Never Smiled Again. Though, ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: A Thief but No Murderer- Chapter 1
Great job on the story. I enjoyed it. I really like your title. It is very creative and captivating. I bet anyone who lays their eyes on the title name ...
Apr 22, 2015
