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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue: the Legend (Flash fiction)

    Hello, Alchemist! Wisegirl22 here for a nice review! This review was brought to you from Team Pen, from club Team Pen and Sword! This, this should be a prologue for ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Emergency Google Search

    Actawesome, hello! It is much of a pleasure to meet you! *grabs Act's hand and violently shakes it* I knew this was interesting as soon as the title stood out ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Clown girl

    Hello, bluecoral, wisegirl22 here for your daily review. Team Pen can never stop! The title attracted me pretty well, and I think you'll sell lotsa books with it. The only ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Our World Now: Introduction

    Hello, cassaundra1, hello! Wisegirl22 decided to drop in for another review, since I was quite busy today! Here's a bunch of things in this big block of words. What I ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: La parada

    Paulwjlee, hello and welcome to Young Writers Society! I know you must be acquainted with this site now, but really, just ask on my wall if you need help or ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Infected Chronicles: prolouge

    Hello, fallenoutofgrace, good job on publishing! You spelled prologue wrong in your title. Fix it, no excuses. Also, no spaces after a quotation mark. "" Good. You are dismissed,"" Speed ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Things I Wish I Would've Told My Mom

    BlueLangton, this. Was. Awesome. I can think of a hundred things that I can tell my mom. Like, understand my beliefs. Don't make me do things I don't want to. ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What is the point of life

    AuroraBlaze, I wave hello and welcome you! I encourage you to keep posting...if you have enough points, that is. XD The reason I clicked on this was the title. While ...

    Aug 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rose

    A beautiful poem once again, jessiethought. I can't believe my imagination of how your career is going to prosper. Maybe it's not my mere imagination, maybe it's actually reality. I ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Ethan. (letter #1)

    Hello, mollykw, this is wisegirl22 here for a stream of endless reviews! This review was brought to you by Team Pen. The first paragraph was very...tell-y. You mostly told everybody ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Ariel

    EmeraldEyes, nice to see you., you haven't been online much, I was worried you'd dropped out. Glad to see you hadn't, I nearly jumped for joy when I saw that ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I Am Sorry(Life Is Crazy)

    Hello, FrostArmor! Nice to see your work! Let's barge you out of the Green Room! This song was great, just a few questions. 1. Was it really necessary to capitalize ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Secret of the One

    Hello, ThereseCricket. I joined the Pen and Sword thing, so I'm here for review week. Let's see what you've got! Okay. Hmmm, you need a space after that period, Cricket. ...

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: American Dream - Chapter One.

    Stilinski, hello! Nice to meet you! I only have a few nitpicks. You accidentally put a space between "an" and "d". They're supposed to be together ,if you didn't already ...

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: This is War; Chapter three

    Kelpies, nice to see my old, old friend! Gotta respect my elders... I was mainly confused by this all because I haven't read the last two chapters, but no matter. ...

    Aug 15, 2014


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi