Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well...this was quite an interesting read here, its definitely not something I've seen in a story before...and well more details below...
Anyway let's get right to it,
Hi I am a 16 year old girl who is confused about one subject and that subject is life and everything in it. What's the point of it? Why are we here?
Hmm...well that's quite an interesting little introduction there, well it certainly does immediately introduce what's going to be in this story...and well those questions certainly do seem really interesting, let's see what her answers are I suppose.
Life consists of love romance, pain, regret and every once in while we experience happiness. But what is happiness? Is it when you find 5 bucks of the ground? When you finally kiss that person who you have been dreaming about kissing? When you get a job you have been hoping for? A good grade on a test? What is happiness? I believe everyone finds happiness in a different way; some money, some fame, some pleasure and some just spending time with someone but for me it's nothing. I enjoy nothing more then just sitting in my room on my iPad reading or watching old shit on Netflix. Now your probably thinking Im one of those loser loner people who everyone thinks I'm gonna have a shoot out at my school but sorry you're wrong. I was a cheerleader and basketball player my friends and boys think I'm perfect or at least that's what they tell me, but I don't believe it. Have you ever looked in the mirror and just cry? Well that's how I start off almost every morning of my life. I don't like what I see; I don't like the shaped of my nose or the freckles on it, the color of my skin, the shape of my cheek bones, my stupid chin, my gross washed out hair color and last but not least my hopeless eyebrows. Just one day I want to look in the mirror and love what I see but I guess that's part of life because if you love yourself your considered cocky but if you hate yourself your apparently a depressed suicidal freak. I don't consider my self a freak but I am very depressed person and have thoughts about killing myself. But I just tell myself wait and see how tomorrow goes and that has apparently been working for me because I am still here and I have made it my mission to wing life and just have fun. And one day I will stumble upon to why we are here and the purpose of life because like everyone says there's only one of you and you are original so make your life the best it can be and make it the most original you you can make it out to be.
That is definitely a very interesting series of answers there to that particular question. I like how you've started out by stating the answers that are most commonly given and sort of establishing a background for the kind of answers that question normally gets. It establishes a sort of baseline for us as the reader to relate to and then also see the uniqueness of the answer of the girl in the story.
And then speaking of that answer, well, that's quite an interesting view that you've created there, by first talking of how the girl expects her friends to think of her there and then revealing exactly the kind of turmoil that is running through her own head about that particular question. And well...that's quite a powerful answer there by her there...she's definitely going through a pretty difficult face in here life but I do like how she's fighting her thoughts and just continuously moving forward hoping for things to get better. Its definitely a lot more inspiring than if she just gave up there.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, it was an interesting read, definitely makes you think about things quite a lot...well at any rate that's about all I've gotta say for now.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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